11/11/24 Memory and imagination (Ha-ha -- I just realized I drew the envelope wrong! Sometimes the simplest things. . . ) |
As I mentioned in yesterday’s post, I’ve sometimes felt disengaged from my comics-based sketch journaling process. My single-panel, sketch-plus-words format is OK for documenting something, but it can feel static (see below; cutline contains a potential idea). One-offs have no sense of sequence or the passage of time, which is part of what defines comics (according to Scott McLeod). When they weren’t made on location, my past attempts at autobiographical comics with multiple panels have been hit-or-miss. I usually tried the traditional three-panel story arc, but often my “story” didn’t feel like it had enough of a narrative arc, and I was forcing it to fit. I didn’t know what I needed. I wanted more structure . . . but not too much!
In a recent YouTube video, Drewscape showed how he uses self-made prompts to structure his diary comics. The prompts can be changed easily to suit his subject matter for the day, so the format is not overly structured. At the same time, the prompts offer questions to respond to, so it’s easier than facing a totally blank page (or, in my case, a blank mind).
Shown at top of post is my first diary comics using Drew’s format. Using an old A5-size Moleskine sketchbook, I quickly drew a grid and chose the following six prompts: something I did; something I saw; a conversation (two middle panels); something that made me happy; something I ate. There’s no particular sequence for the events – except for the conversation, the panels could be rearranged on the page without changing the meaning – but I still have some sense of the passage of time.
Although it wasn’t necessary for the format, I also followed the spirit of Drew’s approach by drawing straight in with ink instead of planning first with pencil. I kept it simple by avoiding fussing about shading and other rendering tactics. I also avoided drawing myself, which is perhaps a comics cop-out, but it also helped me keep things moving instead of getting bogged down with how to draw myself. (Do you miss seeing me, as the narrator, in these panels? Should I draw myself more?)
I am especially pleased that I did all six panels from memory and imagination – no photo assist. That’s a big deal to me because I am always trying to practice drawing more from my head, and it’s always extremely challenging. This felt relatively effortless because I kept the drawings simple.
The only way in which I strayed from his format was that I didn’t label each panel to indicate the prompt, such as “Something that made me happy.” I didn’t have enough space in the small panels, and I think the prompts are implied anyway.
On this particular day, I had enough to fill six panels. That’s probably not always going to be the case, but then I can always choose other prompts – or make fewer panels. (Drew’s video notes include other potential prompts, and I can always make more of my own.) Of course, this six-panel page took longer to draw than my previous single panels, but I definitely found the result more satisfying and engaging. Although I probably won’t do it every day (and I give myself permission not to!), I am going to give this format a solid try for a while to see how it goes.
You asked "Do you miss seeing me, as the narrator, in these panels? Should I draw myself more?" This could offer a very different perspective on your sketches (and a new challenge, should you feel the need…). It would be interesting to see you as part of the interaction between subject and sketcher — perhaps resulting in drawings that blend subjective and objective visions.
ReplyDeleteI found the unsent valentine gently moving — so wistful.
~ David Miller
Thanks for your feedback, David! I will try to draw myself more, now and then, and see what happens.
DeleteYes, the unsent card touched me too, reminding me of things I found when going through my husband's things after he died, especially the list of things he was going to spend the money he'd gotten selling some things on. (Terrible sentence construction!) Our anniversary dinner out and a ficus plant for his mother got me the most. As for should you include yourself more in the drawings? I don't find it necessary, I like your six boxes of prompts, wouldn't expect to see you showing up there. But it could work if you were so inclined. Boy, was that non-committal - lol
DeleteI appreciate your comments, even if non-commital! :-)
DeleteI watched Drewscape’s most recent video and was also very inspired! I’d been trying to do daily diary comics but in a larger format and something about seeing Andrew’s quick, straight-to-ink, small format clicked for me! I also think the prompts are great - there doesn’t always need to be a point or punchline :) Realy enjoyed seeing your version also, I think it captures a lot of different moments and feelings! -Joanna
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear that you were inspired, too! It's a really lexible and low-pressure format!
DeleteI enjoyed seeing these. I think if you are going to put yourself in the sketches you'll need a bit more space in the panels. The card got to me...
ReplyDeleteThanks for the feedback, Joan! I do feel a bit cramped by the page size I've chosen... but I don't want to spend too much time on making larger drawings, either. I'll have to balance all of that going forward...
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ReplyDeleteSo cool that you did it!
ReplyDeleteHope you don’t mind, here are some things that might make the comic even clearer.
For the 1st panel, I see what you were doing and know on what day. But as a reader I don’t know “why” or “how” you feel about it. Cycling through the where what when how why questions and adding one can bring out the context more.
2nd panel: adding a “where” might work. If you can’t show it, can say it as words.
Conversation sequence: yes adding yourself inside might help. That would tell us who is talking. And it also helps to show “where” you are standing in relation to the man.
The bottom ones are nice. It communicates enough emotions:)
Thanks so much for your feedback! I'll think more about your suggestions when I write the next one! :-)
DeleteI was also inspired by Drews cape video. I made notes in my journal. You gave me some feedback on two questions I had about the process: What page size? And whether to use prompts as a heading? I could see that B6 size wouldn't do, and I think now that A5 isn't big enough either. I will shoot for my B5 experimental journal. I appreciated the feedback Andrew gave you. Now I vote for including at least some part of the prompt as a heading. Anne HwH
ReplyDeleteGood feedback, Anne -- thanks! I'm feeling a bit cramped with A5... but I also don't want to bite off too much (page) to chew! :-0
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